Friday, August 8, 2014

A future so bright he needs shades



I used my current locale for a contribution to:

    5 Sentence Fiction

    This week's topic is
    Luminous

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Gazing about like a farm boy in the Big Apple, he entered Provincetown.  Behind him, folded arms, raised eyebrows, judgment and censure.  Ahead, open minds, open hearts, compassion, and freedom. An endless carnival, a pageant of celebration.
He stepped into his future; it was luminous.



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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 8, 2014 at 9:25 AM

    Nice take on the prompt. Freedom, celebrations :)

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  2. AnonymousAugust 8, 2014 at 10:34 AM

    This is a great response to your challenge. It speaks volumes is such well phrased sentences. :)

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  3. Anmol RawatAugust 8, 2014 at 3:37 PM

    Good one :)

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  4. Henny PennyAugust 8, 2014 at 6:40 PM

    Sounds like he has everything to look forward to.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 9, 2014 at 10:13 AM

    Freedom, Hopes,Celebrations :-) Nice take on the prompt.Good Wishes.

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  6. ellen abbottAugust 9, 2014 at 10:36 AM

    excellent

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  7. UnknownAugust 9, 2014 at 1:15 PM

    I am glad his life changed for the better....a bight future like everyone of us look forward too...beautiful take.

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  8. VinithaAugust 10, 2014 at 9:20 AM

    Nicely done!

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