a. Now I don't have to come up with anything new
b. I might as well get a bit more use out of this poem.
(FYI: A villanelle is a nineteen-line poem with two repeating rhymes and two refrains. The form is made up of five tercets followed by a quatrain. The first and third lines of the opening tercet are repeated alternately in the last lines of the succeeding stanzas; then in the final stanza, the refrain serves as the poem’s two concluding lines.
The form could be expressed as: A1 b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 A2.)
A Cautionary Tale
Do not surrender on
Thanksgiving Day
As the table creaks and
groans beneath its load,
For on your waistline those
calories will lay.
I sit as in Aunt Pauline will
sashay
With green bean casserole, onions
a la mode.
Do not surrender on
Thanksgiving Day
Bowls tour the table in an
endless relay.
Potatoes, stuffing, they
tempt and they goad,
I fear on my waistline those
calories will lay.
“Have more!” Grandmother will
lean in to say
and to sweet faded eyes my
will has been bowed.
Do not surrender on
Thanksgiving Day.
The butter calls richly, the
gravy betrays,
Pies wait with menace, and
whipped cream forbodes:
Soon on my waistline those
calories will lay.
Too late for me - my stretch
pants cry, “oi vey!”
Save yourself and resist the
family code.
Do not surrender on
Thanksgiving Day,
Don’t give a new home for
those calories to lay.
Happy Thanksgiving!
I love the poem! I'm afraid I will surrender on Thanksgiving Day. I just can't help myself. Hope you and your family have a happy Thanksgiving!
ReplyDeleteNever approach the Thanksgiving table without your buffet pants.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
ReplyDeleteI wrote a Villanelle for a class. It was depressing, though.
Fun poem, and I think I'll take it to heart. I don't need to give those calories a new home! Happy Thanksgiving, Marty! :-)
ReplyDeleteA good trick would be to use a teaspoon as a serving spoon for yourself, that way you get to eat everything! just in tiny amounts.
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