Standing on her cropped suburban lawn, staring at the August
sky and prodding her secret like a sore tooth, Madeleine wished she could
somehow control the passage of time, become its mistress rather than its
servant.
She could hear Rosemary Stimson next door braying at her
long-suffering husband, a man richly deserving future clemency for any acts of
justifiable homicide.
Rosemary had no redeeming qualities that Madeleine could
see; she was judgmental, caustic, even cruel, given the slightest opportunity.
Madeleine glanced up as an indigo cloud dissolved to shine a corpulent moon upon her, and now helpless, she was drawn to the
neighboring house as the traitorous urge overwhelmed her, a tsunami of need.
Rosemary was sitting at her porch window, so near, so near,
as Madeleine crept closer and closer and finally in one practiced motion, she
turned her back to the house, leaned over, lifted her summer frock, and pressed
herself to the glass as Rosemary’s offended shrieks rolled across the house.
Mooning?
ReplyDeleteShe didn’t, did she?
Ooooh yeah. Shine on!
DeleteDid Madeleine plan her escape route?
ReplyDeleteWell, one thing about her particular activity - identification is usually iffy.
DeleteYou are so good at this! I keep meaning to send my daughter to your blog. She would love "Five Sentence Fiction". She would love your writings.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ms. P. You are too kind.
DeleteLove where you went with "Moon"!
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